DW Fic: The Bones

Saturday, 14 July 2012 10:16 pm
kaffyr: River's in light (River in light)
[personal profile] kaffyr
Story: The Bones
Author: [personal profile] kaffyr 
Characters: River Song, The Doctor
Rated: PG13
Word Count: 729 per Google Docs
Edited by: the very wise [personal profile] buckaroobob , aka [livejournal.com profile] dr_whuh
Summary: River Song understood nothing but weariness. It took a long time for her to learn anything else.
Author's Notes: I originally wrote this as the response to an LJ Whofic community contest prompt but, as isn’t too surprising for me, finished it too late to enter. As I get older, I understand too well that “being tired” can be the disarmingly banal disguise for a great many evils; it seemed as natural as breathing to me that River Song would be its victim. The title probably means little unless you have been engulfed by exhaustion.
Disclaimer: As much as I wish it were otherwise, no Whoniverse characters are mine. They are the sole properties of the BBC and their respective creators. I intend no copyright infringement, and take no coin. I do, however, love them all, and thank the BBC for letting me play in their sandbox.

She could not remember any time when she was anything less than exhausted.

It was just life, she’d thought before now. She had been certain that everyone felt it, the drag and the grasp of fatigue. Even if they pretended not to, they surely must feel the weight; they lied when they laughed or rested or loved with ease. She knew it as surely as she knew how to lie herself.

Even after she was told differently, that love came without hurt, that life could be lived undamaged, she had never really understood.

And no wonder. Long before she knew she was living backward - not linearly, of course, but in the ways that mattered to her - she had lived in fear.

Fear drains you, she learned as a child. And fear was easily fed; on no sleep and scarce nutrition, on ruthless training, on hard shelter and harder teachers. It flourished on bruises and battles, and on hiding every thought and emotion from trainers and taskmasters, all those programmers and punishers who ruled her days.

You can survive operations and drugs and confusion and loss, she learned. You can survive beatings and insults, and even, barely, assaults on body and soul. But you pay for survival with weariness beyond weariness, bitter and bone deep and greedy; sucking the color and air and energy from your every thought and move, poisoning the universe with cynicism and ketones.

She escaped the suit, tearing her skin, breaking her bones and staining her path with blood in payment for her freedom. She wandered the back roads of America in 1969, alone and slowly dying.

She was reborn. But she still had to hide, and she still ran. The pressure of plans and lies, of dissembling and working out all those stories and strategies, still dragged her to earth and crushed her into the dirt.

She learned to make the painful crawl of her days look like a carefree dance to others, but she fell into sleep each night wondering if she would ever wake up - or if she wanted to, for any reason other than the brutal dictate of her own will.

She died again, and was reborn again, still in flames and still in battle.

He wound about her life like rope. Sometimes he pulled her down into darkness that threatened to crush her like fathoms of starless ocean. At other times he pulled her free from entanglements, out from behind bars and away from enemies. He would pull her farther and farther up into the sky until she soared higher with him than she could by herself. She didn’t mind, even if she always fell once she was out of his orbit because he eventually left her alone, too tired to fly.

He changed her.

She fell from hate into conscience, from time into Time Disrupted. She fell from telling the truth in order to kill, to telling lies in order to keep the truth alive. She fell from being alone and running away, to finding family and running toward them. And the weight only grew heavier by virtue of its transmutation from lead to gold. Love was an even more onerous burden than she had feared it would be.

He would whisper to her about freedom, after they made love and before she sank into her always troubled sleep. She would laugh, wiping tears from her eyes as her bones ached.

Then … one more death. This was to have been the final one, the one in which she finally, finally, repaid the debts and the deaths of others, all of her lies and cruelties, everything with which she’d cluttered and lessened her life.

She wondered fleetingly - her head bursting, tears boiling and steaming off her face in the heat and pain of one last starburst - if she would finally be free of gravity’s exhausting pull.

It hurt, more than she thought possible, but before she had a chance to scream for more than a few thousand years, she evaporated, seethed into nothingness …

… and was reborn into light. Splintered refractions, mirroring green sward and impossible sky, coalesced into a picture of her own soul, cleansed, clear as the finest crystal.

And for the first time in her poor widdershinn’d life, the weight of exhaustion was gone, just as he had promised.

She flew.


Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 09:55 am (UTC)
kerravonsen: Sarah Williams, the book of the Labyrinth: "imagine" (imagine)
From: [personal profile] kerravonsen
You make the words sing.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 11:32 am (UTC)
just_ann_now: (Default)
From: [personal profile] just_ann_now
This is heart-wrenching.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 01:40 pm (UTC)
promethia_tenk: (river melody)
From: [personal profile] promethia_tenk
Oh, Riveeeeerrrrrrr . . . /o\

I'd never even considered her life that way, but I know that feeling and it seems all too probable. Beautiful, evocative job with the prose too.

Date: Monday, 23 July 2012 11:24 pm (UTC)
promethia_tenk: (river rory wait)
From: [personal profile] promethia_tenk
Thank you--that means a great deal to me.

Actually, I have my sneaking suspicions that River might rather like being in jail: a refuge, some peace and quiet and rest, not so many hard choices to face. But I accept that I am Totally Wrong in this, just as I am in defending her ending in the Library computer, because fandom tells me it is so ; )

Date: Wednesday, 18 July 2012 02:39 am (UTC)

Date: Sunday, 22 July 2012 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mymatedave.livejournal.com
Very much so.

Date: Wednesday, 25 July 2012 10:56 pm (UTC)
evilawyer: young black-tailed prairie dog at SF Zoo (Default)
From: [personal profile] evilawyer
Love turns of phrases here.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com
This is beautiful. Oh, River.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hanorganaas.livejournal.com
What a beautiful fic great job.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 04:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
Beautiful...so perfectly, perfectly RIVER.


Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lonewytch.livejournal.com
This is a stunning piece. It's incredibly dark, and also very very moving - and i could feel an ache in my chest as i read it. It's a perspective of her life i've never considered, and never read by anyone before, that everything she's been through would make her so exhausted. But it makes perfect sense to me, and your fic captures it beautifully.

The way that you describe things is beautiful, and very very evocative. There are so many bits of the fic that i love, that if i was to point them out i would be quoting the whole thing at you! So instead, i'm just going to point to the whole fic and tell you that i loved it.

And her death at the end - perfectly described, and that moment of grace that the fic ends on is wonderful.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maruad.livejournal.com
I haven't read your story but River Song makes me remember "Listen to the river sing sweet songs to rock my soul". I don't know if there was inspiration in Brokedown Palace (the song) for you or not but that is where those two words took me.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maruad.livejournal.com
IIRC the song, Brokedown Palace, is on American Beauty by the Grateful Dead. Fred Haskell used to sing a wonderful version of this song (he still may).

Date: Monday, 16 July 2012 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maruad.livejournal.com
He would sometimes blend it into Ripple.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeynoir.livejournal.com
Oh, this is so painful and powerful and so lyrical. It’s a marvellous look at the darker sides of River’s life, and the toil and the tiredness and the ways they relate are perfectly described.

And this view of the Library – an afterlife. I really like that.

+ love that title.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeynoir.livejournal.com
I firmly believe that it really is River in the Library.
I firmly agree with you.

(I also think that someday the Doctor will be able to bring her out, or join her in there. But that's a whole 'nother story.)
Agree with this, as well, 'nother story or not. ;) It might seem like endgame to Ten, but I don't think it's quite that to Eleven.

Date: Sunday, 15 July 2012 07:07 pm (UTC)
lost_spook: (dw - Eleven reading knitting book)
From: [personal profile] lost_spook
Oh, that was really beautiful, and sharp, and well-written.

Date: Monday, 16 July 2012 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shegrewhearts.livejournal.com
This is beautiful. <\i>
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Date: Monday, 13 August 2012 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. This is lovely. The end is so hopeful--the concept of heaven or an afterlife has always been really scary to me, in part because I imagine eternity would just be impossibly tiring. But I like this.

Date: Monday, 13 August 2012 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Are you going to put it up on the Teaspoon at some point?

Date: Monday, 13 August 2012 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Oh, yay! *runs off to add to favorites*


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